Winged Nuts

Going Too Far

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Based on ACTUAL EVENTS. My original ending was completely different, but Fireknight's incident really did occur during filming.

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This one was my very first attempt at a picfic. The blurry pictures are because I was using a long exposure instead of a flash. Of course, if you move the camera while the shutter is open, things get blurry. My original ending for this was to be a fight breaking out between Jetfire and Skyfire, then another one between Jetfire, Skyfire, and Firestorm, and finally all three of them turning on Fireknight when they discovered he was cheating. However, while I was setting up Fireknight for one shot, he fell off the table, and this new ending came to mind instead.

If you look at the third panel, Fireknight's checking if anyone's looking. The fourth, he's making his move, and the fifth, he's nipped a few $500s from the bank. Upon reflection, I wish I hadn't used Fireknight for this, since it isn't the type of thing I expect him to do, but what's done is done.

To give you an idea of how much detail was put into the layout, the Monopoly game in progress is an actual "in-progress" Monopoly game.


©2003 James J. Hoxsey